Rough Cut Feedback

Today we uploaded our rough cut and got feedback from our teacher. As we were was editing, Rebecca gave us feedback, she suggested we should cut a lot of unnecessary bits out as our film opening was way to long. She told us to cut some bits from Shannon's waking up scene and the walking scenes of both characters. Furthermore, she suggested using cross fades rather than dissolves between some scenes. Also, she talked to us about where we will place our titles and we came up with a few ideas, such as placing them over the walking scenes as the character only occupied one part of the screen.